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my resistance is
glazed over
closed-mouth film on a clouded pond

but weak

push push push

you’ll find a warm gush
of giving in
my letting in
the seal never
breaks but
baby
it will cave
it will seem to
        slide    away

and then and then (Smile!)

the deep sink in, I’ll wrap
you slow around a foggy grin
wind the gauze, a filmy spin
to circle circle your swelling skin
settle on your arms in silk-lined mist
your mouth submerged in mine
and milk-flood kiss

and I’ll hover over the surface scene
show through my smirking dry guard-post teeth
shy glimpses of the soft and wet beneath
©2009 ~BirdStar
:iconbirdstar:

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4.2009

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:iconyouinventedme:
yes!

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconbirdstar:
Oh yes! Thanks for the fav.
:icontruth-n-vacancy:
fantastic...metaphorically effective...sensual, visual. very nice :)

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Possibly falling...melting...pacing...bracing myself for what might come next...
:iconclair:
Incredible. Really.. truly incredible. The flow, the form, and the energy you have created within this piece is penetrating in the most delicate of ways.

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